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Good evening Stingrays families. 

I am proud to know that in a time of need our team and our community come together and support those that need it. I am sad to inform you that a long time Stingrays supporter and past swim mom Keridon McMahon passed away suddenly yesterday. She leaves behind a husband, step son and two daughters.

We would like to collect donations for her family at the upcoming meets this week. We will have a jar at the concessions stand accepting cash and checks made payable to Chris McMahon.

We appreciate your support and will keep you updated if there is further need from the family.

Your truly,

Stingrays Swim Board